speech 2 outline

Safe parking in Iowa

Purpose statement:
The Iowan government should pay more attention to safe parking, including general private parking and highway parking.

Thesis statement:
Should increase monitoring cameras in parking lots
Should establish more parking stations on the highways.

Introduction:
There are lots of parking issues in Iowa, violation, charge, space, at the same time, safety as the first element when we choose to park, so we should be concerned about the existing problems of safe parking in Iowa.


Personal experiences:
My car have been hit and run twice in parking lot. The first time I was lucky that I happened to see my vehicle hit by someone else , then I record his license plate number and call the police. However, second time, I only saw the lights of the car smashed by other vehicle but there was no way to find out who hit my vehicle.

Main points:
we should build a good parking environment for each other.


resources:
1.https://www.safetyandhealthmagazine.com/articles/16573-safe-parking-for-truckers-iowa-set-to-debut-info-management-system-in-2019
There are not many truck rest stations on the highway in Iowa which would lead to unsafe parking of trucks.

2. https://www.thegazette.com/subject/news/business/creating-a-better-route-to-truck-parking-in-iowa-20180721
Highway safe parking of trucks

3. https://www.kcrg.com/content/news/Hit-and-run-kills-9-year-old-486424791.html
Hit a 9 year-old bot and run, lead to many people were injured.

4. https://www.iowainjured.com/library/what-to-do-if-you-were-involved-in-a-hit-and-run-accident.cfm
Iowan law of hit and run: 321.262

5. https://reolink.com/how-to-choose-the-best-parking-lot-security-cameras/

6. https://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-4918342/China-installs-20-million-AI-equipped-street-cameras.html

7. https://abcnews.go.com/US/hit-run-deaths-time-high-aaa-study/story?id=54733792

analysis of sample proposals

1.Course Requirement: Extortion
strengths: correct structure and enough evidences
weakness: language could be easier

3.A proposal to allow off-campus purchases
strengths: clear statements and concise language
weakness: not many examples or evidences to prove his opinions


2.Why the United States should adopt nuclear power
strengths: enough evidences
weakness: more of hook

topic proposal of speech 2, Nov 12, 2018

Discussion of the subject:
Parking issues in Iowa: parking space and parking monitoring.

Focus:
I will suggest to increase parking spaces and monitoring in parking lots.

Reason or rationale:
By my personal experiences,
I often can't find a parking space when I have class. There is still no parking space after I wait for ten or twenty minutes. Then I would late for class that the instructor deducts my attendance marks.

My car have been hit and run twice in parking lot. The first time I was lucky that I happened to see my vehicle hit by someone else , then I record his license plate number and call the police. However, second time, I only saw the lights of the car smashed by other vehicle but there was no way to find out who hit my vehicle.

A lot of students in order to find a parking space lead to traffic jam.

Resources:
1. https://www.thegazette.com/subject/news/business/creating-a-better-route-to-truck-parking-in-iowa-20180721
2. http://itsnt774.iowa.uiowa.edu/parent-times-archives/issues03-04/winter03-04/parking.html
3. http://www.iowastatedaily.com/article_2b100a68-3ad1-5da5-8c07-ceb457fa2955.html

argument of speech 2, Nov 7, 2018

This major assignment probably ask us to provide relative evidences or arguments to persuade audiences and agree with the question we discussed.
The question could be safety recommendations, study suggestions or working issues, and the field we chosen should be common and necessary in daily life. 
Then, we should come up with some solutions to solve those problems.
In order to increase credibility, we must use more than three outside resources during the speech.

Problem:
What resources we should use? Academic or non-academic?
What's the structure for this speech?