First, I will introduce the game "Warframe" to audiences so that they can know more information about characters and their abilities. Then, I will mention that the game developer release a new character every 3 months on their official website. Players need to purchase on official website directly or take a lot of time on game tasks to own this warframe.
This game is free to play at all, while players can spend money on official website to directly purchase characters or weapons.
Then, the favorite character I like in this game is Nekros. (Show commercial)
Commercial Purpose:
To publicze and sell the new character on official website, by arousing the interests of the players in Warframe.
How to reach:
1. the use of gruesome background music is suitable for character setting
2. there are mostly dim light in this video, and the enemy is also scared of the new character,which convinces players that the character is powerful and worth buying.
3. show general abilities of the character to help players know more details about Nekros.
Logo:
1. Game's icon looks like a blooming lotus, which is very attractively for those players who are not playing this game
2. White and blue, looks tidy and simple.
3. The main character is this game named "Lotus".
Effective: successfully arouse players' interests
Personal feeling:
1. I really like this new character
2. I think this character is powerful and valuable
3. Want to get it as soon as possible, no matter spend a lot of time on the game tasks or directly buy in official website
I will make slides for each point and some relative images for this game in power point.
Conclusion: This commercial helps game developer selling their products
Tuesday, September 25, 2018
revision for preliminary analysis of the commercial
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=InN07z-8LwE
This commercial introduced a new warframe, which is a character in the game. At the beginning of the video, there is a distinct headline states this game is "blood and gore violence" and only apply for "aged 17 and over".
The purpose for this commercial is publicizing and selling this new character, because players need to purchase directly on official website or take a lot of time on game tasks to own this warframe.
As an audience, I really want to get this character as soon as possible after watched this video, because this commercial clearly showed Nekros' controlling and powerful abilities to captivate enemies.
For the logo of this game, we can easily find it in the bottom right corner and at the end of the video. The logo looks like a blooming lotus, at the same time, the highest commander in this game is also named "Lotus". Players can see this logo everywhere during the missions of the game. There is no doubt that this logo as a significant icon for this game.
Then, the use of gruesome background music in this video indicates the main abilities for this character, like a sorcerer to control others. At the same time, there are mostly dim light in this video, and the enemy is also scared of the new character, which convinces players that the character is powerful and worth buying.
This commercial introduced a new warframe, which is a character in the game. At the beginning of the video, there is a distinct headline states this game is "blood and gore violence" and only apply for "aged 17 and over".
The purpose for this commercial is publicizing and selling this new character, because players need to purchase directly on official website or take a lot of time on game tasks to own this warframe.
As an audience, I really want to get this character as soon as possible after watched this video, because this commercial clearly showed Nekros' controlling and powerful abilities to captivate enemies.
For the logo of this game, we can easily find it in the bottom right corner and at the end of the video. The logo looks like a blooming lotus, at the same time, the highest commander in this game is also named "Lotus". Players can see this logo everywhere during the missions of the game. There is no doubt that this logo as a significant icon for this game.
Then, the use of gruesome background music in this video indicates the main abilities for this character, like a sorcerer to control others. At the same time, there are mostly dim light in this video, and the enemy is also scared of the new character, which convinces players that the character is powerful and worth buying.
Sunday, September 23, 2018
preliminary analysis of speech 1, Sep 23，2018
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dAUX2xalEuU
This link is for Steam
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iULOJTZB_jA
This link is for PLAYERUNKNOWN'S BATTLEGROUNDS
https://www.warframe.com/thesacrifice/info
This link is for Warframe
When it comes to discussing commercial products, clothing, vehicle and phone, and of course, game industry is considered as an important role in daily life. In order to introduce specific games in modern times, I would like to pick two games in Steam.
(Then, I will firstly introduce what is steam for audiences.) (Show the video in first link) There are up to 18.5 million users played on Steam in the beginning of 2018, and Steam is one of the biggest game platforms in this world. (Introduce more details for Steam... Who invented it, when was it released, how many games in Steam and so on...)
The first game I want to introduce is PUBG, released on March 23, 2017. (You can choose First-Person Shooting view or Third-Person Shooting view)(Cost $30 on Steam) Then, I will introduce more details for this game and talk about how this game make more and more monkey...
Secondly, I will introduce a similar game with PUBG, also shooting game but only TPS. (Free to play) Warframe. You don't need to play anything for this game and you can get 99% of products in this game. (Released in 2013)
My purpose: I hope more audiences would buy games on steam or play these two games after my presentation.
Logos:
For steam: blue and white, like engineered logo
For PUBG: black and yellow, just used "PUBG" these four letters on logo
For warframe: white and blue, used core icon in this game
This link is for Steam
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iULOJTZB_jA
This link is for PLAYERUNKNOWN'S BATTLEGROUNDS
https://www.warframe.com/thesacrifice/info
This link is for Warframe
When it comes to discussing commercial products, clothing, vehicle and phone, and of course, game industry is considered as an important role in daily life. In order to introduce specific games in modern times, I would like to pick two games in Steam.
(Then, I will firstly introduce what is steam for audiences.) (Show the video in first link) There are up to 18.5 million users played on Steam in the beginning of 2018, and Steam is one of the biggest game platforms in this world. (Introduce more details for Steam... Who invented it, when was it released, how many games in Steam and so on...)
The first game I want to introduce is PUBG, released on March 23, 2017. (You can choose First-Person Shooting view or Third-Person Shooting view)(Cost $30 on Steam) Then, I will introduce more details for this game and talk about how this game make more and more monkey...
Secondly, I will introduce a similar game with PUBG, also shooting game but only TPS. (Free to play) Warframe. You don't need to play anything for this game and you can get 99% of products in this game. (Released in 2013)
My purpose: I hope more audiences would buy games on steam or play these two games after my presentation.
Logos:
For steam: blue and white, like engineered logo
For PUBG: black and yellow, just used "PUBG" these four letters on logo
For warframe: white and blue, used core icon in this game
Monday, September 10, 2018
First draft for writing in the field of economics
Writing in the field of Economics
When
it comes to discussing Economics, calculations, concepts, diagrams, but at the
same time, writing is also as the important part in the field of Economics. In
order to understand the daily writing content and form of professionals in the
field of economics, I interviewed a first-year master in the economic college.
The
people I interviewed already had a whole year of experience in economic and satisfied
with his work. Usually, he spends 3 to 4 hours in economic writing every day,
and his writings are in order for those commercial employees more effectively to
understand financial information. According to him, he will consider the
following aspects when he is writing the papers, content, purpose and
understanding degree. In general, if the staff has financial foundation before,
he will write some professional words without too many comments and focus on
analyzing not just introduce. On the contrary, if the staff doesn’t have any
professional knowledge before, he may write some easier words to explain those
difficult concepts and help readers to understand (Personal communication,
September 3, 2018).
During
his career, he also encountered many papers that are hard to read or understand.
For example, in his opinion, those abbreviations of financial words and complex
words make the paper harder. Occasionally, he will receive several e-mails
containing many long sentences, and those long sentences will lead him hard to
read. So, he thinks it’s very important to keep short sentence or use easier
way to explain the same point. It’s important, because reader will hard to make
sense of the author’s words when the sentences are too long (Personal
communication, September 3, 2018).
Besides,
he indicated that he learned a lot of excellent thinking skills during writing
class, because writing class gives him an opportunity to focus on editing,
rewriting, and improving his papers in a period. His major also requires him to
answer queries from clients and come up with his new questions, and these
writing missions must be explicit structure to effectively deliver the
necessary information. Therefore, he learned a few different ways to improve
his work, such as make a proposal, write first draft and revise the final
draft. I strongly agree with him because it just likes what we are doing in
this rhetoric course. More importantly, summaries, comments and analyses for
other articles are useful for writers to improve their writing skills.
Therefore, I would like to analysis the writing skills for the following six
resources.
Tuesday, September 4, 2018
comments for IR Sample, Tuesday, September 5
------The Role of Writing in Political Science
Three strengths:
1.Write enough words over than 8 pages
2.Correct reference page in the bottom
3.nice word choice, easily to understand
Three Weakness:
1.in text citation don't have page number
2.subtitle not good, should not just divide by academic and non-academic writing
3.personal analyses and opinions are not enough
-------- Writing in Psychology
Three strengths:
1.Nice organization makes author easily to understand his topic
2.Explanations for resources and personal opinions are enough
3.(I can't find three strengths for this article......)
Three Weakness:
1.no subtitle and title page
2.not enough references, no in text citation, wrong reference page and organation
3.not enough words, only 2 full pages, quote too many words for recources
4.poor word choice and sentences pattern are not good
--------Writing as a Creative Writer
Three strengths
1.nice organization, structure and subtitles
2.enough resources and words
3.great word choice and clear statements
Three Weakness:
1.some in text citations are not correct
2.some statements are repeat several times
3.Introduction should write a little bit more
------Writing in the Field of Economics
Three strengths
1.enough resources and introductions
2.correct in text citations
3.clear statements
Three Weakness:
1.subtitles are not enough, can't just divide by academic and non-academic resources
2.quote too many words, should use his own words
3.Introduction too long, some sentences are repeat
--------The Role of Writing in Engineering
Three strengths
1.enough resources and words, and correct references page and subtitles
2.excellent organizations and structures
3.nice word choice and clear statements
Three Weakness:
1.some in text citations are lost of page numbers
2.should also analysis between academic and non-academic articles
3.should add some details or examples to prove his opinions.
----------Writing in the Business Discipline
Three strengths
1.correct introductions, references and subtitles
2.use special formulas to prove or explain his statements
3.clear statements and nice word choice
Three Weakness:
1.not enough resources, only 4
2.some in text citations are lost page number or year
3.analysis are not enough, should add some personal opinions
Three strengths:
1.Write enough words over than 8 pages
2.Correct reference page in the bottom
3.nice word choice, easily to understand
Three Weakness:
1.in text citation don't have page number
2.subtitle not good, should not just divide by academic and non-academic writing
3.personal analyses and opinions are not enough
-------- Writing in Psychology
Three strengths:
1.Nice organization makes author easily to understand his topic
2.Explanations for resources and personal opinions are enough
3.(I can't find three strengths for this article......)
Three Weakness:
1.no subtitle and title page
2.not enough references, no in text citation, wrong reference page and organation
3.not enough words, only 2 full pages, quote too many words for recources
4.poor word choice and sentences pattern are not good
--------Writing as a Creative Writer
Three strengths
1.nice organization, structure and subtitles
2.enough resources and words
3.great word choice and clear statements
Three Weakness:
1.some in text citations are not correct
2.some statements are repeat several times
3.Introduction should write a little bit more
------Writing in the Field of Economics
Three strengths
1.enough resources and introductions
2.correct in text citations
3.clear statements
Three Weakness:
1.subtitles are not enough, can't just divide by academic and non-academic resources
2.quote too many words, should use his own words
3.Introduction too long, some sentences are repeat
--------The Role of Writing in Engineering
Three strengths
1.enough resources and words, and correct references page and subtitles
2.excellent organizations and structures
3.nice word choice and clear statements
Three Weakness:
1.some in text citations are lost of page numbers
2.should also analysis between academic and non-academic articles
3.should add some details or examples to prove his opinions.
----------Writing in the Business Discipline
Three strengths
1.correct introductions, references and subtitles
2.use special formulas to prove or explain his statements
3.clear statements and nice word choice
Three Weakness:
1.not enough resources, only 4
2.some in text citations are lost page number or year
3.analysis are not enough, should add some personal opinions
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