comments for IR Sample, Tuesday, September 5

------The Role of Writing in Political Science
Three strengths:
1.Write enough words over than 8 pages
2.Correct reference page in the bottom
3.nice word choice, easily to understand

Three Weakness:
1.in text citation don't have page number
2.subtitle not good, should not just divide by academic and non-academic writing
3.personal analyses and opinions are not enough

-------- Writing in Psychology
Three strengths:
1.Nice organization makes author easily to understand his topic
2.Explanations for resources and personal opinions are enough
3.(I can't find three strengths for this article......)

Three Weakness:
1.no subtitle and title page
2.not enough references, no in text citation, wrong reference page and organation
3.not enough words, only 2 full pages, quote too many words for recources
4.poor word choice and sentences pattern are not good

--------Writing as a Creative Writer
Three strengths
1.nice organization, structure and subtitles
2.enough resources and words
3.great word choice and clear statements


Three Weakness:
1.some in text citations are not correct
2.some statements are repeat several times
3.Introduction should write a little bit more

------Writing in the Field of Economics
Three strengths
1.enough resources and introductions
2.correct in text citations
3.clear statements

Three Weakness:
1.subtitles are not enough, can't just divide by academic and non-academic resources
2.quote too many words, should use his own words
3.Introduction too long, some sentences are repeat

--------The Role of Writing in Engineering
Three strengths
1.enough resources and words, and correct references page and subtitles
2.excellent organizations and structures 
3.nice word choice and clear statements

Three Weakness:
1.some in text citations are lost of page numbers
2.should also analysis between academic and non-academic articles
3.should add some details or examples to prove his opinions.

----------Writing in the Business Discipline
Three strengths
1.correct introductions, references and subtitles
2.use special formulas to prove or explain his statements
3.clear statements and nice word choice

Three Weakness:
1.not enough resources, only 4
2.some in text citations are lost page number or year
3.analysis are not enough, should add some personal opinions